Thursday, April 5, 2012

Concentration














I'm sill deciding on the order of the photos.

13 comments:

  1. I think every single one of these are very strong. You have a good eye when it comes to colors. I like that everyone of these tells a story and it really makes you admire these people. You did a great job!

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  2. I really like all of your pictures! I think you did a great job with following your concentration theme, you did a fantastic job with colors, especially with the primary collage. One thing I don't like it the last collage image, I like the middle but the other two could be stronger. That's the only not so good thing I see in your concentration and that's not even a big deal! You did such a great job!

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  3. Wonderful job. You did an amazing job with colors and contrast and it really strengthens/intensifies your photos. The fifth photo isn't quite as strong; your model isn't as clear. Other than that, fantastic job!

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  4. Your last photo blows my mind. These are great! You did an absolutely terrific job on communicating their lives. They're beautiful, excellent job! :)

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  5. The editing in these photos and the obveous effort put forth is astounding. I love your concentration as well.

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  6. I like how in each photo, it seems to have its own color theme. Also, in each one, there's a story. The picture of the guy sitting in the car looking at the camera isn't very clear..but great job!!

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  7. wow these are really impressive. I love the final picture, it was a good idea to tie in some detail-only pictures into this collection

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  8. Your pictures are one of my favorites overall! They are amazing and I love your stories to all these pictures. Every picture is clear where it has to be. NICE!

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  9. You have the best photo stories I have seen. Every picture combination tells a story and the contrasting is great. I really love how detailed and interesting every picture is.

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  10. Becky, you definitly picked a theme that worked for you! I think that by collaging you images and creating a strong story with each collage that you really pushed yourself. They are all composed well and each pictures ties in and has a meaning. You did well on creating a variety within as well. Great job:)

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  11. I really enjoy how you portrayed the tone and mood of each even that was happening. For example, some are playful(dog) and some are extremely serious and intense. Really great job mixing the colors and creating contrast with B+W. Great job!

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  12. These are excellent! The mood is so apparent and every photo really adds to the series. I can't think of anything to change, it's perfect!

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  13. These are all ridiculously good! the all share a strong mood and are all connected. Its perfect!

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